Post by Frederic Bourgault-Christie on May 11, 2006 16:07:30 GMT -5
This is what I have so far, tree included underneath Taijutsu, using the Stance/Move form I picked up from the Drunken Master list:
Name: Doctor Omani Yusikara
Age: 12
Sex: M
Height: 5'11”
Country/Village: Sound
Rank: genin
Physical Description: Omani is a rotund woman in the old Rubinesque sense, with blood red hair highlighted in white and fiery black eyes, like coal and flame. Her skin is ominously pale, making him seem even fairer. Her face rarely smiles, almost always in a furrowing scowl. She always seems preoccupied with something: Even when eating, she seems like he is somewhere else. Her palms are quite fat and large, but his fingers are amazingly slender. Her thighs and shins are colossal yet deeply muscled, and the fatness on her is very narrow. She is in fantastic health due to her medical training. She wears her somewhat curly hair short. Her motion has a strange circularity to it, a spinning or top-like nature...
Clothing: When not on a mission, Omani wears a white skirt with a red crescent mark and her protector very high up above her face to avoid sweat. His pants are light blue scrubs. When on a mission, the protector is over the forehead, and he typically tries to at least partially protect his eyes, as her full sensorium is quite important to her medical and him fighting arts.
Personality: Not at all the fat jolly doctor, Omani is curt, impatient, physical, and judgmental. He isn't mean, and his sarcasm can be refreshing and funny, but he does not win many friends. He has split himself between healing others and fighting. There is a compassionate and deeply concerned person underneath the exterior, and him teachers have seen that he beats himself up over any medical failures, eating so much that it stretches even him prodigous eating ability. He uses his taijutsu to reinforce his surgical skill and knowledge of anatomy.
Personal Nindo: Omani believes in the art of the Ninja as being like the surgical scalpel: Find and root out cancers and eliminate them. It is most important for him that his work have concrete benefit for othims, not simply emotional benefit. Ironically, this allows him to commit horrible butcheries, yet he despises it and the images haunt him. The Sound village's behavior may drive him to defect soon, as every night he sees the people cut open like an earthworm...
Clan/Bloodline: None
Primary Archetype: Human Tank
Secondary Archetype: Offensive Healer
Statistics
Physical
Strength: 20
Speed: 12
Stamina: 12
Mental
Intelligence: 9
Tactics: 5
Willpower: 6
Chakra
Power: 3
Control: 3
Reserves: 4
Jutsus and Techniques
Shuuren Teikiatsu: This form combines drilling circular motions, the usage of gravity and physics, pressure points and anatomical strikes, to form an art that is truly hellish in that it combines piercing, crushing and grappling strikes and techniques flawlessly. While not the most effective against multiple assailants (unless he is able to get a grip on one and use him as a shield against the others), it is devastatingly effective against other individual ninja, even ones much stronger than him. The spinning motion of him art makes him effective at all sorts of combat ranges, meaning that most foes' attempt to stay out of the reach of a particular attack is counterproductive; however, that same effect does mean that at least for most of the art's ascension attacks come out in discrete strikes and motions are vulnerable to interruption. If he can build enough torque, he can be truly devastating and unstoppable, meaning the art is also very good at long fights. While the form does not build existing Chakra, someone with it can use it to great effect; indeed, Omani's brother cultivates massive amounts of chakra to make his blows have a horrible area of effect.
Stage One:
Stat Requirements: Strength 9 Speed 6
Stances:
Neutral Drill: This stance is one whime the body is straight, eithim facing a foe laterally or vertically. The arms are tense and open, and the legs are slightly bowlegged. All this builds tension that can be released quite naturally in inverted drilling motions.
Moves:
Spin Step: This evasive motion quickly slides the feet along the ground.
Twister Comes Down: A powerful punch or kick, this is the penultimate form of the art, a devastating blow that grinds through defenses and twists the flesh and muscles horribly.
Stage 3
Stances:
Neutral Drill: This stance is one whime the body is straight, eithim facing a foe laterally or vertically. The arms are tense and open, and the legs are slightly bowlegged. All this builds tension that can be released quite naturally in inverted drilling motions.
Stat Bonus: +2 Speed, +4 Str
Constant Deflection: This is the passive form of a constant Spin Step. By constantly keeping the body twirling, stepping and moving, Omani can keep blows shunting off of him.
Stat Bonus: +4 Stamina, +2 Speed
Moves:
Tearing Bolt: This grappling move uses powerful twisting to, however used (i.e. in response to a punch or done actively), twist and tear tendons, countering the classic problem of throwing forms: Throws don't hurt except for the fact that you hit the ground. Someone who is struck by too many of these will be quickly crippled.
Fool's Bane
Stage Three
At this stage the first stance is taught, ‘calm’. The Calm stance is utilized in conjunction with the Battle stare to better utilize a defensive position and over time make it into an offensive position.
Battle Stare: Through the battle stare, the user is now able to analyze some obvious patterns, like an opponent constantly moving to one side first, or countering to one side. The stare still last the normal 2 post maximum before forced to blink.
Vital Strikes: The user begins to learn sideswipes and other techniques to throw an opponent off balance so they can attempt a chopping counter-attack. The feet can now be used to strike at lower weak points, like buckling the knees or groin shots.
Response Time: Now that ‘Calm’ is being taught, the user is given a fresh taste of going from a relaxed stance to a blocking or countering stance in a short time. This is an exhausting effort that will usually end with the trainee covered in bruises from failed attempts.
Stance Name: Calm
Stance Bonus: +2 Speed, +3 Stamina
Stance Description: At this level the calm stance is a nervous stance, filled with obvious mocking and badly acted moments of inattention. The user will attempt to keep them selves out of a defensive stance until the target is within 12 feet when charging, or 4 feet when close fighting. Then the trainee is advised to begin blocking so as to avoid damage.
Stance Name: Truth
Stance Bonus: +3 Strength, +2 Speed
Stance Description: At this stage Truth stance is nothing more then an idea. The user can learn to take the stance itself and can use it to fight while on the run, but all other aspects of Fool's Bane are lost.
Sound Offensive:
Myaku (Pulse)
Requirements: Control 3, Tactics 2
Using a minor amount of chakra to strengthen their lungs, the user can release a ball of compacted air that travels quickly up to 15 feet. When the ball impacts something, it hits with force equal to the user's punch. This jutsu is used to teach the basics of air manipulation.
(Planning on going for:
*
*Universal Jutsu
*A scalpel form
*Using the Sound jutsu to combine with my taijutsu to create oscillation abilities
Clothing:
Regular outfit
Off-duty outfit (described under appearance)
Weighted training outfit
Sound headband
Inventory
Two scalpels
Research scrolls: Anatomical
Nodachi
Drum (for sound Offensive)
Beads (draped over armor for sound Offensive)
Biography: Omani comes from a family of rotund ninja in the Sound village. All of them have been masters of the martial arts, simple folk who eat and drink too much for their health. As a child he was one of the few thin members of the family incapable of performing the taijutsu that surprisingly requires the incredible weight to makes it flexible spinning motions. He had no interest in fighting or the ninja lifestyle, and despite innate intelligence and the ability to specialize to a degree few had seen in him studies, he scarcely got into the academies and that only at the pressure of him parents. They wanted him to grow up like the rest of the family: Successful servants of the Kage of Sound.
All that changed when he met a beautiful and talented, yet quite sick, boy in school. She was so open and kind, and her chakra manifested as plants and birds. She told him once after he had been kissing her surreptitiously for a week that she loved him. He still remembers sitting by the riverbank, hearing the sound of the gurgling and trickling water. That night, they experimented like young lovers do...
And in the morning, her condition has worsened so. He stood helplessly by while his parents fretted and worried away the hours and while healing chakra failed to correct the imbalance in his body. He silently stood and learned, and did everything he could, and attracted the attention of the greatest doctors in the village... but his greatest efforts were for naught.
He is now seeking to honor the memory of that young girl by proving his skill to Kabuto, Orochimaru, and the others involved in the medical-nin program, so he may be able to bring her to life once more...
Other Info:
*He has traded general inability or disinterest with ninjutsu for his superior taijutsu and medical skill.
Name: Doctor Omani Yusikara
Age: 12
Sex: M
Height: 5'11”
Country/Village: Sound
Rank: genin
Physical Description: Omani is a rotund woman in the old Rubinesque sense, with blood red hair highlighted in white and fiery black eyes, like coal and flame. Her skin is ominously pale, making him seem even fairer. Her face rarely smiles, almost always in a furrowing scowl. She always seems preoccupied with something: Even when eating, she seems like he is somewhere else. Her palms are quite fat and large, but his fingers are amazingly slender. Her thighs and shins are colossal yet deeply muscled, and the fatness on her is very narrow. She is in fantastic health due to her medical training. She wears her somewhat curly hair short. Her motion has a strange circularity to it, a spinning or top-like nature...
Clothing: When not on a mission, Omani wears a white skirt with a red crescent mark and her protector very high up above her face to avoid sweat. His pants are light blue scrubs. When on a mission, the protector is over the forehead, and he typically tries to at least partially protect his eyes, as her full sensorium is quite important to her medical and him fighting arts.
Personality: Not at all the fat jolly doctor, Omani is curt, impatient, physical, and judgmental. He isn't mean, and his sarcasm can be refreshing and funny, but he does not win many friends. He has split himself between healing others and fighting. There is a compassionate and deeply concerned person underneath the exterior, and him teachers have seen that he beats himself up over any medical failures, eating so much that it stretches even him prodigous eating ability. He uses his taijutsu to reinforce his surgical skill and knowledge of anatomy.
Personal Nindo: Omani believes in the art of the Ninja as being like the surgical scalpel: Find and root out cancers and eliminate them. It is most important for him that his work have concrete benefit for othims, not simply emotional benefit. Ironically, this allows him to commit horrible butcheries, yet he despises it and the images haunt him. The Sound village's behavior may drive him to defect soon, as every night he sees the people cut open like an earthworm...
Clan/Bloodline: None
Primary Archetype: Human Tank
Secondary Archetype: Offensive Healer
Statistics
Physical
Strength: 20
Speed: 12
Stamina: 12
Mental
Intelligence: 9
Tactics: 5
Willpower: 6
Chakra
Power: 3
Control: 3
Reserves: 4
Jutsus and Techniques
Shuuren Teikiatsu: This form combines drilling circular motions, the usage of gravity and physics, pressure points and anatomical strikes, to form an art that is truly hellish in that it combines piercing, crushing and grappling strikes and techniques flawlessly. While not the most effective against multiple assailants (unless he is able to get a grip on one and use him as a shield against the others), it is devastatingly effective against other individual ninja, even ones much stronger than him. The spinning motion of him art makes him effective at all sorts of combat ranges, meaning that most foes' attempt to stay out of the reach of a particular attack is counterproductive; however, that same effect does mean that at least for most of the art's ascension attacks come out in discrete strikes and motions are vulnerable to interruption. If he can build enough torque, he can be truly devastating and unstoppable, meaning the art is also very good at long fights. While the form does not build existing Chakra, someone with it can use it to great effect; indeed, Omani's brother cultivates massive amounts of chakra to make his blows have a horrible area of effect.
Stage One:
Stat Requirements: Strength 9 Speed 6
Stances:
Neutral Drill: This stance is one whime the body is straight, eithim facing a foe laterally or vertically. The arms are tense and open, and the legs are slightly bowlegged. All this builds tension that can be released quite naturally in inverted drilling motions.
Moves:
Spin Step: This evasive motion quickly slides the feet along the ground.
Twister Comes Down: A powerful punch or kick, this is the penultimate form of the art, a devastating blow that grinds through defenses and twists the flesh and muscles horribly.
Stage 3
Stances:
Neutral Drill: This stance is one whime the body is straight, eithim facing a foe laterally or vertically. The arms are tense and open, and the legs are slightly bowlegged. All this builds tension that can be released quite naturally in inverted drilling motions.
Stat Bonus: +2 Speed, +4 Str
Constant Deflection: This is the passive form of a constant Spin Step. By constantly keeping the body twirling, stepping and moving, Omani can keep blows shunting off of him.
Stat Bonus: +4 Stamina, +2 Speed
Moves:
Tearing Bolt: This grappling move uses powerful twisting to, however used (i.e. in response to a punch or done actively), twist and tear tendons, countering the classic problem of throwing forms: Throws don't hurt except for the fact that you hit the ground. Someone who is struck by too many of these will be quickly crippled.
Fool's Bane
Stage Three
At this stage the first stance is taught, ‘calm’. The Calm stance is utilized in conjunction with the Battle stare to better utilize a defensive position and over time make it into an offensive position.
Battle Stare: Through the battle stare, the user is now able to analyze some obvious patterns, like an opponent constantly moving to one side first, or countering to one side. The stare still last the normal 2 post maximum before forced to blink.
Vital Strikes: The user begins to learn sideswipes and other techniques to throw an opponent off balance so they can attempt a chopping counter-attack. The feet can now be used to strike at lower weak points, like buckling the knees or groin shots.
Response Time: Now that ‘Calm’ is being taught, the user is given a fresh taste of going from a relaxed stance to a blocking or countering stance in a short time. This is an exhausting effort that will usually end with the trainee covered in bruises from failed attempts.
Stance Name: Calm
Stance Bonus: +2 Speed, +3 Stamina
Stance Description: At this level the calm stance is a nervous stance, filled with obvious mocking and badly acted moments of inattention. The user will attempt to keep them selves out of a defensive stance until the target is within 12 feet when charging, or 4 feet when close fighting. Then the trainee is advised to begin blocking so as to avoid damage.
Stance Name: Truth
Stance Bonus: +3 Strength, +2 Speed
Stance Description: At this stage Truth stance is nothing more then an idea. The user can learn to take the stance itself and can use it to fight while on the run, but all other aspects of Fool's Bane are lost.
Sound Offensive:
Myaku (Pulse)
Requirements: Control 3, Tactics 2
Using a minor amount of chakra to strengthen their lungs, the user can release a ball of compacted air that travels quickly up to 15 feet. When the ball impacts something, it hits with force equal to the user's punch. This jutsu is used to teach the basics of air manipulation.
(Planning on going for:
*
*Universal Jutsu
*A scalpel form
*Using the Sound jutsu to combine with my taijutsu to create oscillation abilities
Clothing:
Regular outfit
Off-duty outfit (described under appearance)
Weighted training outfit
Sound headband
Inventory
Two scalpels
Research scrolls: Anatomical
Nodachi
Drum (for sound Offensive)
Beads (draped over armor for sound Offensive)
Biography: Omani comes from a family of rotund ninja in the Sound village. All of them have been masters of the martial arts, simple folk who eat and drink too much for their health. As a child he was one of the few thin members of the family incapable of performing the taijutsu that surprisingly requires the incredible weight to makes it flexible spinning motions. He had no interest in fighting or the ninja lifestyle, and despite innate intelligence and the ability to specialize to a degree few had seen in him studies, he scarcely got into the academies and that only at the pressure of him parents. They wanted him to grow up like the rest of the family: Successful servants of the Kage of Sound.
All that changed when he met a beautiful and talented, yet quite sick, boy in school. She was so open and kind, and her chakra manifested as plants and birds. She told him once after he had been kissing her surreptitiously for a week that she loved him. He still remembers sitting by the riverbank, hearing the sound of the gurgling and trickling water. That night, they experimented like young lovers do...
And in the morning, her condition has worsened so. He stood helplessly by while his parents fretted and worried away the hours and while healing chakra failed to correct the imbalance in his body. He silently stood and learned, and did everything he could, and attracted the attention of the greatest doctors in the village... but his greatest efforts were for naught.
He is now seeking to honor the memory of that young girl by proving his skill to Kabuto, Orochimaru, and the others involved in the medical-nin program, so he may be able to bring her to life once more...
Other Info:
*He has traded general inability or disinterest with ninjutsu for his superior taijutsu and medical skill.
, and my Intelligence needs to go up a good amount before four in Fool's Bane. I have not taken into account these higher attributes in actual gameplay so far, so I hope this isn't a problem. I have not altered my Sound Jutsu.